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Introductory and Non-essential Elements

If you have difficulty with this test, the Punctuating Phrases and Clauses handout may be helpful.

								
				
No. of Questions= 25

In questions 1 through 15, choose the sentence which is correct.

1.
a) In the first round of the tournament I played one of the best teams.
b) In the first round of the tournament, I played one of the best teams.
2.
a) Fortunately, I had a spare set of keys with me.
b) Fortunately I had a spare set of keys with me.
3.
a) At the track meet our team placed first.
b) At the track meet, our team placed first.
4.
a) The driver who caused the wreck was going too fast.
b) The driver, who caused the wreck, was going too fast.
5.
a) My car which is seven years old refuses to start on cold mornings.
b) My car, which is seven years old, refuses to start on cold mornings.
6.
a) Lydia Carbrera, who was born in Cuba, wrote many books about African Cuban culture.
b) Lydia Carbrera who was born in Cuba wrote many books about African Cuban culture.
7.
a) Lee, noticing my confusion, rephrased her question.
b) Lee noticing my confusion rephrased her question.
8.
a) Those participating in the food drive should bring their donations by Friday.
b) Those, participating in the food drive, should bring their donations by Friday.
9.
a) The students who were elected as representatives attended a special conference.
b) The students, who were elected as representatives, attended a special conference.
10. Note: Assume that you have more than one cat.
a) Your cat, lying on the back of the couch, seems contented.
b) Your cat lying on the back of the couch seems contented.
11.
a) Yes, I heard your question.
b) Yes I heard your question.
12.
a) Exhausted after the five-mile hike, the scouts took a break.
b) Exhausted after the five-mile hike the scouts took a break.
13.
a) In the first round of the golf tournament I played the best golfer in the state.
b) In the first round of the golf tournament, I played the best golfer in the state.
14.
a) After I had locked the car door I remembered that the keys were still in the ignition.
b) After I had locked the car door, I remembered that the keys were still in the ignition.
15.
a) Following directions can sometimes be difficult.
b) Following directions, can sometimes be difficult.
16. Questions 16 through 25 form a paragraph. Decide if each statement is correctly punctuated, needs one more comma, needs two more commas, or should have commas removed.

Phoebe Jeter who is from South Carolina played a significant role in the Persian Gulf Conflict.

a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
17. Lieutenant Phoebe Jeter an African-American woman led an army platoon during the Persian Gulf Confict in 1991.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
18. Jeter will always remember the tense January night when she heard the words "Scud Alert!"
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
19. As a result of her orders, at least two Scud missiles were destroyed.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
20. When the conflict was over Jeter was the only woman who had shot down a scud!
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
21. That forty percent of the women who served in the Gulf, were African Americans may be an understatement.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
22. Figures have been released by the Pentagon, but some say the actual number may have been close to fifty percent.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
23. The Persian Gulf Conflict tested the mettle of all female personnel as they shared hazardous assignments, primitive living conditions, and various battle responsibilities with men.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
24. Their professionalism and courage earned the women, serving in the Gulf, considerable respect.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed
25. Perhaps now, because soldiers like Phoebe Jeter served so bravely in the Persian Gulf, people will think differently about the role of women in the United States armed forces.
a) correct sentence (no changes needed)
b) the sentence needs one comma
c) the sentence needs two commas
d) the comma(s) in the sentence should be removed






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